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Love this. It's a moving and powerful piece of microfiction. Well done.

Editorial note: The first is a run-on sentence. It might read better something like this, "He knows these woods… they were his childhood playground." Elipsis is a my favorite punctuation to adapt a run-on sentence and make it indicate a pause in a continuing thought.

The last sentence of that paragraph should definitely be two separate sentences.

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Author, D. Denise Dianaty
Author, D. Denise Dianaty

Written by Author, D. Denise Dianaty

Artist, Poet, author, wife & mom May my epitaph be "She reflected love into the world."

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